Ideally I prefer to find a title once the book is written and that’s the way I’ve approached it with my private eye and police series. Only at the end can I be sure what this particular book is about compared to the others and I’ve often found unexpected themes emerging in the process of writing.
I take a couple of weeks to mull over possible titles, write down any themes, topics, motifs from the novel along with anything about location, character or images that seem particularly strong. Then I browse books of phrase and fable, proverbs, the dictionary and thesaurus.
I like to use phrases when I can find them and titles that can be interpreted in more than one way. It helps if there’s something unusual or memorable in the title, to distinguish it from all the others on the shelves. Once I’ve created a short-list I gradually whittle it down until I have a favourite. It’s a bit like choosing a name for a baby: a list of alternatives informed by the nature of the creature once you know what it’s like. Sometimes I find the perfect title only to discover that another crime writer has beaten me to it (looking at you Mark Billingham).
More recently, with my stand-alone novels, I’ve had to come up with an idea for the theme of the book and its title at the start of the process – with an option to alter the name if I discover something better in the meantime. And stashed away I’ve a couple of titles that I love the sound of but have never (yet) suited my stories.
If you don’t know anything about this festival you can learn more here. It was a great chance to meet friends and readers and to hear authors whose work I love debate issues about writing crime. It’s also a chance to network. I met my Dutch publisher, Claudia van der Werf from De Fontein, who will be bringing out the Scott and Bailey novels, starting next year. On Friday afternoon a panel on eBooks caused a great buzz. Other people have written eloquently about it – you can read a good account from Steve Mosby, also coverage on the welovethisbook website and from the controversial author at the heart of the storm.
The consensus is that eBooks are here to stay and everyone in the industry needs to adapt to the changing market. How cheap and disposable should our stories be was a key issue. How to value books? If people get used to downloading books for 99p or less will that devalue books as a whole, and end up leaving most authors even more hard up than they already are? So far my experience of digital publishing has been very positive. My publisher Constable and Robinson won the Ingram digital publishing award this year and Rob Nichols, the digital marketing director, is skilled at using promotions for limited periods to attract readers. It worked so well for me that Witness reached No.2 on Amazon’s Kindle fiction list and No.1 in Crime, Mystery and Thrillers. I’ve also self-published some of my backlist and set a modest price which keeps sales ticking over – and keeps out-of-print titles available for new readers.
On the Saturday evening I was delighted to be one of the suspects in Come Die With Me, a murder mystery dinner organized by Ann Cleeves, and based on her novel The Glass Room novel. One of the Vera Stanhope series. What’s special about the event is it gives readers an opportunity to meet and get to know the upcoming authors who host each table. And to take away free signed copies of the author’s latest title. My fellow suspects, real identities, author N.J. Cooper, publisher Jeremy Trevathan, forensic soil scientist Lorna Dawson and actor Jon Morrison turned in stellar performances. Though one of them was lying through his teeth and turned out to be the guilty party. It was a great event – part of a great weekend and I’m already looking forward to next year.
I am off to Harrogate tomorrow for the Theakstons Old Peculier Crime Writing Festival and I’ll be writing a blog about it on my return. If you want to know more while it unfolds follow #TOPcrime2012 on Twitter.
I am celebrating this week, after a surprise win at the Daggers Awards on 5th of July. Margaret Murphy and I jointly won the Short Story Dagger, Margaret with her story The Message and me with Laptop, both from Best Eaten Cold, a Murder Squad anthology, edited by Martin Edwards. Many thanks to Martin for his excellent work as our editor, and to Matilda Richards at The History Press who approached us initially with the idea of doing a new anthology, also to Barry Forshaw for writing the foreword and, most of all, to Murder Squad. Since forming, in 2000, at Margaret’s instigation, we’ve been able to support and encourage each other and jointly promote our work and that of the genre as a whole. I’ve been lucky enough to be short listed twice before, for the John Creasey best first novel in 1995 and for the dagger in the library in 2006. It is a tremendous honour and a real boost to get on a shortlist (and something to include on book covers and in biographies for time immemorial!).
I can tell you now it genuinely was a surprise to win, there is no subtle whispering in corners to tip you the wink. So I was very relaxed during the meal before the announcements, not expecting to have to do more than share in the applause. Our amazement at winning was such that I’m only glad that Margaret was able to string together some words of thanks. I was useless.
As a reader, when choosing library books, I’d often be drawn by a Dagger reference on the cover. A guarantee of quality if you like. I think awarding the Daggers is the most important aspect of the CWA’s work and I’d like to say a big thank you to those in the CWA who have worked so hard to raise the profile of the prizes in recent years. Congratulations too to everyone who made the shortlists and to those on the long lists for the Gold, John Creasey and Ian Fleming Steel Daggers. Those winners will be announced later this year.
Finally a massive thanks to all the crime fiction readers out there – the most important part of the equation.
I’m delighted to have won the short story dagger, jointly with my friend Margaret Murphy. Details are here and I’ll be writing a bit more about it in the next few days. Meanwhile I am still celebrating!
I read for pleasure – and to feed my habit. I get antsy if I’ve not got a book available (and one for after I’ve finished it). My addiction is fiction – stories. There are many more good books out there than I have time to read so if I’m not captivated by a story early on I don’t persist – life’s too short. If it is trite or confusing or boring or inaccessible then I give up. I won’t finish a book just because I’ve read 30 pages. But there seems to be a recent trend for ever longer books. Novels that I start out enjoying but that lose their appeal as I reach page 300 and realise there’s still 200 to go. I wish they’d been streamlined, edited more fiercely and were less spun out. I know contracts often state 80,000 or 90,000 words for a book and perhaps when supermarkets sell books there’s a pressure to offer quantity as much as quality. I’m a short writer myself (tall woman but skimpy on the page) and always panic about whether I’ll have enough material for a whole novel. For the record my latest offerings Split Second and Dead To Me come in at 312 and 393 respectively which is something of a mystery to me given I was fretting all the way through about running out of story. Are writers being asked to write more wrist-breakers? Is it a question of pacing rather than size? Perhaps. After all, I devoured Wolf Hall by Hilary Mantel at over 600 pages and didn’t want to reach the end. But when I see a book is 400 pages or more I do wonder if it’s worth all those words or if the story would have been better told leaner and meaner.
It was amusing to read in the Guardian Review John Dugdale writing about the trend for copycat book jackets, especially as three of my recent titles fall into one of the categories. The Single Female Eye. The book jacket is phenomenally important; it’s what makes the reader pick up the book in the first place or click on the listing. Though sometimes publishers seem to coy about the notion of imitation. My first book Looking for Trouble, a private-eye novel, was published by Crocus, a small press, as a result of winning a competition. On a shoestring, they produced an effective, three-colour cover (black, white and red) featuring a woman in a car watching a typical Manchester street in the rain. When I got contracted to a much bigger publisher for my next title in the series, Go Not Gently, they designed a brand new cover. It featured a woman in a car watching a typical Manchester street in the rain. ‘Great,’ I said, ‘you decided to stick with the same design.’ There was a flurry of disavowals and denials. This was four colours, it was a different angle, it was nothing like the first jacket. Hmmm.
People sometimes ask how much say authors have a cover design. It’s minimal in my experience (apart from that very first time). A standard letter goes out along the lines of, ‘We think this is delightful, we hope you agree.’ And that’s that. To be fair, most of the time it is delightful and I do agree and when I have on occasion raised concerns, which tend to be about the cover not reflecting the tone of the book, I have been lucky to have publishers who have addressed them. But involvement in the process, chatting with a designer, or thinking up ideas or motifs? Nope, doesn’t happen. The most bizarre jackets tend to be foreign translations where one can only assume that cultural differences account for the bemusing designs. For example the Chinese edition of The Kindest Thing, my novel about assisted suicide, shows a woman in a billowing white dress, face obscured by windblown blonde hair, standing in a wheat field. But they must know what sells for their market. Meanwhile I’m waiting to hear about design ideas for my next novel – I’m betting on another Single Female Eye.
Late May was Crimefest in Bristol. Among the highlights for me was listening to Sue Grafton interviewed by Maxim Jakubowski about her life of crime. She was by turns witty, insightful, intelligent and warm. It was also a delight to listen to James Sallis (whose books I love for their language and sense of humanity) debating on panels with other great writers like Andrew Taylor and Sophie Hannah.
A very special event was the discussion hosted by Barry Forshaw between Søren Sveistrup and David Hewson about The Killing – the TV series and David’s recent novel. We learnt a lot about the process of creating the groundbreaking show as well as the challenges for an author writing a book that both honoured the film and stayed true to the demands of a piece of fiction. Elements from the TV did not work as prose and David had early agreement that where the demands of the book required he would alter elements of the story.
One aspect that particularly intrigued me was hearing Søren talk about the differences between series 1 and series 2. Not only was series 2 half the length (at 10 episodes) but there was a conscious decision to do something different each time. Søren spoke of how the first series was very emotional in its depiction of a loving family torn apart by their loss and he did not want to cover the same emotional territory in the second series. So series 2 was deliberately less emotionally moving. I’ve already talked with friends about how I found series 1 much more compelling and suddenly those reactions make sense. I’m a sucker for a good weep! Although I was still hooked as a viewer, I didn’t care about the characters in the second series nearly as much. Søren says he’ll be going somewhere new again with series 3.
Meanwhile David’s novel, one of three he will do, is getting rave reviews. He spoke of having to radically change his writing style to find something that fit the tone and style of The Killing and of having two screens at his computer, one playing the DVDs and one where he typed up his interpretation of the story. Apparently the ending is different from the TV version. I’m writing the Scott and Bailey novels and the business of writing characters that other people have created interests me a lot. You want to get it right but you also want to bring your own skills to bear on depicting them in action. One thing is clear, the two media are very different and in order to enter these sorts of projects everyone needs to be happy embracing those differences.
I’m just back from Crimefest in Bristol. A busy and interesting weekend with some fascinating panels and discussions which I’ll write more about next time. On Friday evening the shortlists were announced for six of the CWA Daggers and I was delighted to be included in the Short Story shortlist for my story Laptop from Best Eaten Cold. A big thanks to Matilda Richards at The History Press for commissioning the anthology, to Martin Edwards who edited the book and Barry Forshaw for the foreword. Congratulations too, to fellow Murder Squaddie, Margaret Murphy, who is shortlisted with her story The Message from the same anthology. We’ll find out who has won on 5th July! Meanwhile you can find out all about the shortlist here http://www.thecwa.co.uk/daggers/2012/short.html.
So after last week’s post, what did change my mind?
Partly the sheer weight of opinion in favour of social networking as a way of connecting with readers and promoting my work. And I got to thinking that compared to all the other efforts I’d made to promote my books (some of which were toe-curling in the embarrassment stakes) wasn’t this actually a relatively easy way to go about it?
Another significant factor was talking to my friend and fellow Murder Squad member Ann Cleeves who has been on Twitter for some time. She made it sound easy, and even enjoyable, and stressed that you could tweet once a day if that was all you wanted to do. Then Murder Squaddie Margaret Murphy recommended a book – Tweet Right: The Sensible Guide to Twitter by Nicola Morgan. I downloaded this and found it clear, witty and very informative. She’s particularly good on etiquette and do’s and don’ts which is reassuring for a newbie. (I wish more tweeps had read the book, or something similar, it might get rid of some of the more irritating tweets!) With a new website planned, if I ever was going to get social now seemed to be time to make the leap.
How’s it been? Well, regarding Twitter – I’m addicted as predicted but I love it so far, I like being able to dip in and out of socialising and I LOVE that it’s so short – I’m one of those writers who naturally writes less rather than more so it’s tailor made for me. The blog’s another matter – whether updating this every week is going to feel too much like a chore, I can’t tell yet. I hope not. As for Facebook – well, got to draw the line somewhere. At least for now. But I’m a fickle creature. Watch this space.